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Person in my dreams
Shrouded in a veil of mist
Tell me who you are!
©2008-2009 ~52Cardds
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First time using true punctuation in a haiku. I like it though. It adds more flavor, as well as a bit more freedom. I shall explore this.

Anyways, I told you more dream visions were coming.
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I remember dreaming up a poem once. It was on a piece of parchement, written in letters of fire. Of course, the whole thing went up in flames before I could commit it all to memory, but I know a bit.

Merlin

--
"When will you pay
for the dreams you threw away?
You made it look so easy..."


"Bareknuckle Theatre," by Hot Lava Monster

How To Save A Life: [link]
I have the irrational fear that sharing it with people will allow them to have some sort of power over me... so...

Merlin

--
"When will you pay
for the dreams you threw away?
You made it look so easy..."


"Bareknuckle Theatre," by Hot Lava Monster

How To Save A Life: [link]
'kay then. I won't pressure you for it.

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